Genre: Sci-Fi / Horror
Publisher: Mirror Matter Press
Publication Date: 22nd Jan 2016
Pages: 51
MY REVIEW:
A copy of Empty
was sent to Confessions of a Reviewer by the author Ty Arthur, in exchange for
an honest review. This is said review. This book is published by Mirror Matter
Press.
If you have your own blog or website, then I urge you to
have an open call for submissions every now and again. When you do that, you
tend to have people you have never heard of before email you and ask you to
review their stuff. This is a brilliant way to get to read new talent that you
wouldn’t necessarily read otherwise.
This is exactly what happened when Ty Arthur asked if I
would have a look at Empty. This is a
brand of horror I don’t read enough of. Horror set in space. I don’t even know
if there is an exact genre name for it but I do love it when I come across a
good one.
How did Empty
turn out?
The research vessel, Thorne, is in trouble. It is
drifting with no engines and none of its crew appear to be able to do anything
about it. Apart from one man seen wandering the decks chanting strange
religious type sayings.
Many decades later, the salvage ship, Penrose, is sent
into deep space to try and bring the Thorne home. It has a very important cargo
on board that seems to be very secret.
Junior Engineer 3rd Class Hansen is a loner,
but not by choice. He is sent to work by himself after a prank on his senior
officer goes wrong. Little does he know that he is going to play the major part
in trying to save the Penrose and ultimately, the universe.
So, characters in this one. You really only have Hansen.
I will explain that a bit later but as characters go he is an all-round
likeable person that you will warm to. He doesn’t have it easy. A bully for a
boss and a job in the very bowels of the ship. He just longs to be on the
salvage mission with everyone else. When he gets his chance his true
personality shines.
The plot? Well this is a short story so it needs to pack
an awful lot into a short space of time. It is a familiar story. Ship goes dead
for some reason, salvage sent to bring it home, something lurks on the original
ship. A bit same old, same old, but Mr Arthur has a significant difference in
this one that makes it stand out for me and made it hugely tense and
entertaining and horrific.
A distinct lack of dialogue.
There is very little talking at all in this. Most of the
story is in Hansen’s head. You see what he is thinking and how he comes about
the decisions he makes. He has a very analytical mind. Always thinking things
through in a very logical way, rather than jumping straight in. A lot of
stories need dialogue to break up the monotony. Not this one. You know the old
saying in space no one can hear you scream? That’s because it is lonely. There
isn’t much of an atmosphere (scuse the pun) so it’s quiet and still and eerie.
The way Ty Arthur has written this story, that lonely
feeling is at the fore all of the time. It feels almost, well, Empty! Hansen is alone in everything he
does. Even when he is called upon to do important work, he is still alone. Even
when he is involved with others, he is still alone. When he is in deep despair
and panic towards the end of the story, he is alone.
When you read this, you will start to feel alone. You
will feel the emptiness. You will feel the constant quiet. No noise. Nothing.
It starts to make your skin crawl. It starts to make you look around you to
make sure nothing is behind you. When you cough, the sound of your own voice
will scare you.
The atmosphere that is portrayed in this story genuinely
scared the wee out of me. I felt very alone and very in need of a hug when I
finished this story. I was cold and scared.
Bravo Mr Arthur. Bravo.
To summarise: If you like your horror to have that little
bit extra that genuinely makes your skin crawl and makes you crave human
interaction when you finish it, just so you don’t feel alone, this is for you.
I loved this story. I cannot wait to read more from Mr
Arthur.
General rating:
★★★★★ excellent.
Sci-Fi / Horror
rating:
★★★★★ and again.
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Book Synopsis:
There are terrors still waiting to be discovered in the
vast emptiness of space. After millennia of travel through the void, man has
convinced himself he is master of the stars.
Down-on-his-luck, stuck performing punishment duty in the
lower levels of the Penrose, Junior Engineer 3rd Class Hansen wants nothing
more than to see the wreckage of a newly discovered ship dating back to man's
earliest deep space explorations.
The engineer is about to get his wish, and in the process
come face-to-face with a long-dormant horror waiting patiently for the perfect
vessel. What he'll uncover in the darkness will threaten to consume him, body
and soul.
Montana native Ty
Arthur fell in love with fantasy and horror at an early age, but frequently had
to engage in his passions secretly during his youth. Turning to the
written
word as a cathartic outlet, Arthur writes to exorcise his demons. He lives in
the cold, dark north with this amazing wife Megan.
And
for more about Ty, you can find him on social media:
Appreciate the review and thanks for taking the time to dive into the different elements of the story. Glad I could get some of those specific feelings and themes across. It's interesting to see the different takes on the story coming from different reviewers. Another one gave me an overall positive review, but took the exact opposite view on the lack of dialog and didn't care for how much of the story takes place in the character's thoughts. I'm trying to strike a balance there on my next book that's nearly done now, with two characters who are introspective and one who is much more chatty.
ReplyDeleteThe lack of dialogue made it for me. The story is called Empty....that feeling of being alone was superbly portrayed. I'm glad I picked up some of the stuff you wanted to get across. I love when that happens.
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